Peileppe Production

I need to tweak this a bit, Dormund in this story is a bad guy “sort of” – but I would like to put more depth into him. So assuming that he was engaged with Trisha – in an alliance made by Trisha’s father (the king) and Dormund’s parent ; and then Trisha felt in love with Kassidrin. Then Dormund’s anger and evilness makes sense.

Furthermore, Dormund doesn’t love Trisha (I keep it that way) – but he feels that she belongs to him rightfully, by the official engagement/alliance made by the authorities – and Dormund is a man of honor, relying on the law and on authority because of his noble rank – he cannot grasp the fact that people might rely on feelings, and emotions instead of respecting the rules.

So the new portrait would be :

• A one-sentence summary of the character’s storyline
  • he has no emotion, except cruelty
  • he rely on rules and law (he’s a paladin wannabe) and act as a judge 
• The character’s motivation (what does he/she want abstractly?)
  • his main motivation is getting more power

• The character’s goal (what does he/she want concretely?)
  • he wants revenge and get Trisha back whatever the cost
  • he despises the people that won’t respect the law and would punish them cruelly

• The character’s conflict (what prevents him/her from reaching this goal?)
  • he lacks the courage and heart of a real leader so hide behind law and rules
  • he has no emotion – he just blindly wants what is rightfully his

• The character’s epiphany (what will he/she learn, how will he/she change?
  • rules can be bent
  • flexibility is good
  • expressing his emotions and enjoying life is better than living under strict rules

• A one-paragraph summary of the character’s story-line
  • Dormund is a rich, cruel, stupidly attached to the very precise word of law that will learn that following the rules blindly can cost a lot of misery for him and people around him

Name : Trisha
Race : human
Age : young 20-30
Class : Mage / level : 14
Str : 7 / In: 18 / Wi: 16 / Co: 11 / Dx: 15 / Ch: 16

• A one-sentence summary of the character’s storyline
  • very attractive Princess that has a profound sense of duty
  • in love with Kassidrin, she has ended up the relation because of her father request

• The character’s motivation (what does he/she want abstractly?)
  • she wants to have a peaceful kingdom

• The character’s goal (what does he/she want concretely?)
  • she wants to become queen

• The character’s conflict (what prevents him/her from reaching this goal?)
  • her love for Kassidrin and her sense of duty

• The character’s epiphany (what will he/she learn, how will he/she change?
  • after her father changed his mind, she may have what she wants